Sunday, December 18, 2016

On Chosen Ones


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  1. Hmm, very good. I like that you avoided ever repeating TG sexual motive. Instead you focused on the world around and on the new perspective.

    Kepp it up.

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  2. I guess he used to play GTA

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  3. lol - Another interesting take on this story line. Goofing off when you've got all of eternity doesn't sound like too much of a waste of time. I'm surprised bands of players haven't attacked each other in pursuit of their quests . . . Good story.

    Cheers
    Zapper

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