Hmm, very good. I like that you avoided ever repeating TG sexual motive. Instead you focused on the world around and on the new perspective.Kepp it up.
I guess he used to play GTA
lol - Another interesting take on this story line. Goofing off when you've got all of eternity doesn't sound like too much of a waste of time. I'm surprised bands of players haven't attacked each other in pursuit of their quests . . . Good story. CheersZapper