Saturday, December 17, 2016

Subject Twenty-Four 12

I don't like violence, and I don't like guns, so it's surprising to me that I've written as violent a series as this.

I'm taking Matt through a character arc here; this series is more about Matt's inner transformation than his outer transformation.  This caption marks the midpoint of this series; we still have a long way to go.  It won't be an easy road.

You can follow this and my other series on my series page.


  1. Ah, now we learn the meaning of the series name.

  2. The character development you're doing in this one is intense. I feel bad for Matt and for Anna (even though she's now dead). Even if Matt escapes every time he looks into the mirror he's going to see Anna. It's like part of her will live on with Matt for the rest of his/her life.

    I tend to like stories with happy endings, but as you know, real life isn't like that. Bad things happen to good people and bad people sometimes win. I can't wait to see where you take this.